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Wear (correction)
Message de fredos posté le 05-12-2005 à 17:51:09 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, Quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît?
merci
Yes, I would fight to carry something which one likes, because one is in a democracy, and one thus has the right to be able to wear clothing that one desire. Moreover, as one can see it in the book, the girls were obliged to wear a skirt all the year, which in winter could be difficult and unpleasant. I find, to be able to get dressed as have the desire, is a manner of expressing themselves, and of being able to show his mood. For example in black if one is sad, or in red to show that one is happy. It is true, to carry a uniform in the schools was a tradition, but it is necessary to learn how to evolve and leave these traditions, to make evolve the world. Admittedly, there is a limit, one should not wear clothing aggressive or shocking in the public places. This is why, I would say that one has the harbour due what one wants harmed since it’s not others.
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Edité par lucile83 le 05-12-2005 18:02
A la demande de webmaster il est demandé aux membres et aux modérateurs de ne plus corriger les textes complets des devoirs ni les dissertations
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Edité par bridg le 05-12-2005 18:37
Message de fredos posté le 05-12-2005 à 17:51:09 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, Quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît?
merci
Yes, I would fight to carry something which one likes, because one is in a democracy, and one thus has the right to be able to wear clothing that one desire. Moreover, as one can see it in the book, the girls were obliged to wear a skirt all the year, which in winter could be difficult and unpleasant. I find, to be able to get dressed as have the desire, is a manner of expressing themselves, and of being able to show his mood. For example in black if one is sad, or in red to show that one is happy. It is true, to carry a uniform in the schools was a tradition, but it is necessary to learn how to evolve and leave these traditions, to make evolve the world. Admittedly, there is a limit, one should not wear clothing aggressive or shocking in the public places. This is why, I would say that one has the harbour due what one wants harmed since it’s not others.
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Edité par lucile83 le 05-12-2005 18:02
A la demande de webmaster il est demandé aux membres et aux modérateurs de ne plus corriger les textes complets des devoirs ni les dissertations
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Edité par bridg le 05-12-2005 18:37
Réponse: Wear (correction) de jey_king, postée le 05-12-2005 à 17:55:30 (S | E)
déjà dit, déjà refusé, pas de correc tion !
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Edité par lucile83 le 05-12-2005 18:03
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