Correction/grass flip flops
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Message de asao posté le 03-11-2017 à 16:52:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour la correction du texte ci-dessous s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance.
Do you know the grass flip flops ? No ? I'm not surprised just because, they are a new invention, by flipflopqueen, made with synthetic grass bonded to a pair of classic flip flops.
These flips flops are the top ! Let me explain why...
Tell me, are you tired of being a ship ? (Yeaah) I have the solution. You can be too original with these special, funny and unique grass flip flops ; amazing for everyday wear !
Moreover, there are several colors for the grass like red, green, blue or pink ; you have a large choice.
And, are you fed up always breaking your flip flops ? No problem, we use materials really resistant.
It's also well know that flip flops give many blisters BUT we want the best for you so, we use high quality materials so much that grass flip flops prevents blisters. Wouldn't that be cool ?
What's more, walk in grass so comfortable all day is, unquestionably, a great pleasure.
This grass acts as a massage on the feet and can help you relax.
I've forgotten, If you are looking for a gift, grass flip flops are perfect for everybody : men, women, children -young and old, of course-.
About the price, it's unbelievably cheap : only 10 dollars. Don't miss this golden opportunity !
So, place your first order today and like Nicolas Hulot, adopt grass flip flops. You won't regret it !
Life is better with grass flip flops.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2017 18:37
Message de asao posté le 03-11-2017 à 16:52:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour la correction du texte ci-dessous s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance.
Do you know the grass flip flops ? No ? I'm not surprised just because, they are a new invention, by flipflopqueen, made with synthetic grass bonded to a pair of classic flip flops.
These flips flops are the top ! Let me explain why...
Tell me, are you tired of being a ship ? (Yeaah) I have the solution. You can be too original with these special, funny and unique grass flip flops ; amazing for everyday wear !
Moreover, there are several colors for the grass like red, green, blue or pink ; you have a large choice.
And, are you fed up always breaking your flip flops ? No problem, we use materials really resistant.
It's also well know that flip flops give many blisters BUT we want the best for you so, we use high quality materials so much that grass flip flops prevents blisters. Wouldn't that be cool ?
What's more, walk in grass so comfortable all day is, unquestionably, a great pleasure.
This grass acts as a massage on the feet and can help you relax.
I've forgotten, If you are looking for a gift, grass flip flops are perfect for everybody : men, women, children -young and old, of course-.
About the price, it's unbelievably cheap : only 10 dollars. Don't miss this golden opportunity !
So, place your first order today and like Nicolas Hulot, adopt grass flip flops. You won't regret it !
Life is better with grass flip flops.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2017 18:37
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