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Diseases (corrections)
Message de amy298 posté le 03-04-2007 à 09:02:00 (S | E | F | I)
Quelqu'un pourrait il me corriger s'il vous plait?
Since the beginning the world is struck by various sorts of diseases, which sometimes even go on the rampage. After the plague, the rage, the cholera or still the AIDS, it is now the bird flu which threatens us. This disease which goes on the rampage at animals for some years not does not leave marble when in a possible general pandemic. Not you moreover.
And even the pathogenic virus was identified the scientists are very far from knowing how to eradicate it.
I decided to examine the risks that incur the man and how this virus which made ravages in 1918 and killed millions of persons re-appears 85 years later. I am going to try to group together all the information which i have could pull it under forms of a synthesis, to arrive so at a conclusion which will allow me to have an idea a little more advanced on this virus.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-04-2007 15:59
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Message de amy298 posté le 03-04-2007 à 09:02:00 (S | E | F | I)
Quelqu'un pourrait il me corriger s'il vous plait?
Since the beginning the world is struck by various sorts of diseases, which sometimes even go on the rampage. After the plague, the rage, the cholera or still the AIDS, it is now the bird flu which threatens us. This disease which goes on the rampage at animals for some years not does not leave marble when in a possible general pandemic. Not you moreover.
And even the pathogenic virus was identified the scientists are very far from knowing how to eradicate it.
I decided to examine the risks that incur the man and how this virus which made ravages in 1918 and killed millions of persons re-appears 85 years later. I am going to try to group together all the information which i have could pull it under forms of a synthesis, to arrive so at a conclusion which will allow me to have an idea a little more advanced on this virus.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-04-2007 15:59
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