Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
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Message de oliviette posté le 19-04-2007 à 10:41:23 (S | E | F | I)
Pouvez vous me corriger svp
When I did my training course, I believed that I was going to learn from a lot of things and that I was going to be guided. Unfortunately, I was only with my computer and I had only an Internet ressources. Because no members of the company don't have the knowledge in programming.
Message de oliviette posté le 19-04-2007 à 10:41:23 (S | E | F | I)
Pouvez vous me corriger svp
When I did my training course, I believed that I was going to learn from a lot of things and that I was going to be guided. Unfortunately, I was only with my computer and I had only an Internet ressources. Because no members of the company don't have the knowledge in programming.
Réponse: correction de vero75, postée le 19-04-2007 à 14:36:32 (S | E)
Salut,
- you learn something from someone/something, ta phrase a-t'elle bien le sens que tu veux lui donner?
- il me semble que "tutored" serait mieux que "guided"
- je te propose "I was left alone with a computer"
- je ne comprends pas la phrase suivante "I had only an Internet resources
- la dernière phrase contient une double négation mais je te propose "No one (...) has programming skills"
Voilà.
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Modifié par bridg le 19-04-2007 16:08
Attention d'aider sans faire à la place des membres, merci de votre compréhension.
Réponse: correction de oliviette, postée le 19-04-2007 à 22:59:57 (S | E)
Merci voila la suite du texte, j'en ai encore deux paragraphe.
Mille merci
My task consisted has to create the company website with a paper template. This website contained a accesses to the customer, a newsletters, a chat room, a huge data base and a lot of another pages with a lot of graphics which I myself created with Photoshop and Illustrator.
During my training course, I don't have to like several things. For example, I didn't like atmosphere at work. The employers speak each other employers by emails and they are withdraw into their offices. My office was in a room which was used for a lumber room and the warming almost never works even with weather of winter. Fortunately that I had with me an another trainee and we had could laugh of this situation.
Some supplementary knowledge in programming would to help me during the creation of the website. I didn't use my English during the training course because all the software was in French. In the furtur, I would like to have my “artistic” sense more developed and to improve my English.
