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Message de soso32 posté le 25-02-2008 à 22:11:05 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer mes erreurs car j'ai de réelles difficulté en Anglais
, j'ai vraiment essayer de faire un effort pour traduire ce texte alors pouvez-vous y jeter un coup d'œil?
Merci...
For summarise you my stay, I would say that those few days have been fantastic. I greatly appreciated the Tower of London and the Smugglers Adventure. But other activities such as the Bayeux Tapestry, the visit of Rye and Battle Abbey also were superb: The trip was organized very well. I appreciated the free time that we gave the accompanying adult and there was a very good atmosphere among the students.
However, what a pity that we didn’t have a guide for some tours especially for Bodiam Castle because it would have been interesting to know more about its history. Moreover, the road to arrive at this castle was very long.
Finally, I didn’t have any contact with an authentic british food: no steak & kidney pie… No jelly (green and trembling)… no Fish and Chips…
Even so, to my mind, this trip would be to remake without hesitation for futures classes of secondary school and I hope to return to England in my years of high school!
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Modifié par bridg le 25-02-2008 22:54
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de soso32 posté le 25-02-2008 à 22:11:05 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer mes erreurs car j'ai de réelles difficulté en Anglais
, j'ai vraiment essayer de faire un effort pour traduire ce texte alors pouvez-vous y jeter un coup d'œil?Merci...
For summarise you my stay, I would say that those few days have been fantastic. I greatly appreciated the Tower of London and the Smugglers Adventure. But other activities such as the Bayeux Tapestry, the visit of Rye and Battle Abbey also were superb: The trip was organized very well. I appreciated the free time that we gave the accompanying adult and there was a very good atmosphere among the students.
However, what a pity that we didn’t have a guide for some tours especially for Bodiam Castle because it would have been interesting to know more about its history. Moreover, the road to arrive at this castle was very long.
Finally, I didn’t have any contact with an authentic british food: no steak & kidney pie… No jelly (green and trembling)… no Fish and Chips…
Even so, to my mind, this trip would be to remake without hesitation for futures classes of secondary school and I hope to return to England in my years of high school!
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Modifié par bridg le 25-02-2008 22:54
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Réponse: A short exercise for correction de magstmarc, postée le 26-02-2008 à 12:08:30 (S | E)
Hello,
Voici ce qui me semble faux (en rouge et
)et en rose et 
mes doutesFor
summarise you my stay, I would say that those few days have been fantastic. I greatly appreciated the Tower of London and the Smugglers Adventure. But other activities such as the Bayeux Tapestry, the visit of Rye and Battle Abbey also were superb: The trip was organized very well. I appreciated the free time that we (grammaire + ordre de la phrase) gave the accompanying adult and there was a very good atmosphere among the students.However, what a pity that we didn’t have a guide for some tours especially for Bodiam Castle because it would have been interesting to know more about its history. Moreover, the road to arrive at (pas franchement faux mais il y aurait une tournure plus courte) this castle was very long.
Finally, I didn’t have any contact with an authentic british food: no steak & kidney pie… No jelly (green and trembling)… no Fish and Chips…
Even so, to my mind, this trip would be to remake
without hesitation for futures classes of secondary school and I hope to return to England in my years of high school!
