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Message de babeth54 posté le 13-03-2009 à 22:47:16 (S | E | F)
Good evening
Could you tell me if these sentences are correct :
1) The Barbie Doll is in demand this Christmas.
2) If you will work in India, you will have many employees at your disposal.
3) Since many generations we haven’t taken care of the earth. It will be at the expense of our children.
4) If you download music, it will be at your risk
5) We had to make a report at very short notice when our collegues were ill.
6) Until now, this company has operated at a profit.
7) If I want to change of house during the recession, I wil sell it at a loss.
8)We could not deliver the connectors our customer on time because the delays were beyond our control.
9) The furniture , we found in Paris , are beyond our wildest dreams.
10)We think the defendent is guilty beyond a reasonable doubt.
Thank you indeed.
Babeth
Message de babeth54 posté le 13-03-2009 à 22:47:16 (S | E | F)
Good evening
Could you tell me if these sentences are correct :
1) The Barbie Doll is in demand this Christmas.
2) If you will work in India, you will have many employees at your disposal.
3) Since many generations we haven’t taken care of the earth. It will be at the expense of our children.
4) If you download music, it will be at your risk
5) We had to make a report at very short notice when our collegues were ill.
6) Until now, this company has operated at a profit.
7) If I want to change of house during the recession, I wil sell it at a loss.
8)We could not deliver the connectors our customer on time because the delays were beyond our control.
9) The furniture , we found in Paris , are beyond our wildest dreams.
10)We think the defendent is guilty beyond a reasonable doubt.
Thank you indeed.
Babeth
Réponse: Preposition de brettdallen, postée le 13-03-2009 à 23:10:30 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
je jette un coup d'œil..
1) The Barbie Doll is in(on ajoute souvent "great") demand this Christmas.
2) If you will work in India, you will have many employees at your disposal.(If..Present Simple.., Will+Base Verbale...)
3) Since many generations we haven’t taken care of the earth. It will be at the expense of our children.
4) If you download music, it will be at your risk
5) We had to make a report at very short notice when our collegues were ill.
6) Until now, this company has operated at a profit.
7) If I want to change of house(ou "move house") during the recession, I wil(will") sell it at a loss.
8)We could not deliver the connectors(to) our customer on time because the delays were beyond our control.
9) The furniture ,(non!) we found in Paris ,(non plus!) are beyond our wildest dreams.(alternative: "..., which...., ....")
10)We think the defendent is guilty beyond a reasonable doubt.
Finalement, vous avez fait du très bon travail! bravo!
Réponse: Preposition de robertbrou, postée le 16-03-2009 à 12:09:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je suis d'accord avec brettdallen. C'est bien du bon travail. Voici quelques petites modifications:
1) The Barbie Doll is in(on ajoute souvent "great") demand this Christmas.
"high" peut y aller à la place de "great" également.
3) Since many generations
4) If you download music, it will be at your own risk
7) If I want to move
(Normalement, si on dit "I am moving" sans objet, cela veut dire que l'on vend la maison actuelle et on déménage.)
8)We could not deliver the connectors(to) our customer on time because the delays were beyond our control.
Réponse: Preposition de babeth54, postée le 17-03-2009 à 21:02:39 (S | E)
Good evening,
Thank you to Robertrou and Brettdallen for your encouragements.
I noticed your corrections.
Babeth
