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Message de snowboy15 posté le 19-03-2009 à 16:51:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je suisau en 5ème et je m'entraîne en faisons faisant des news et je crois que j'ai fait(s) beaucoup de fautes (mais je sais pas en quoi) vous pouvez me le corriger s'il vous plaît?
j'attends vos réponse:
last week,the shooting in a school in Germany which located in town of winnenden near to Stuttgart a teenager tim krentschmer who killed nine former classmates three teachers and three more bystanders and injured seven people before turning his gun on himself he stole the pistole which belonged to his father.The school principal who said that last year he broke off a round of psychological counselling
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Modifié par bridg le 19-03-2009 18:06
Message de snowboy15 posté le 19-03-2009 à 16:51:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je suis
j'attends vos réponse:
last week,the shooting in a school in Germany which located in town of winnenden near to Stuttgart a teenager tim krentschmer who killed nine former classmates three teachers and three more bystanders and injured seven people before turning his gun on himself he stole the pistole which belonged to his father.The school principal who said that last year he broke off a round of psychological counselling
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Modifié par bridg le 19-03-2009 18:06
Réponse: News en anglais de laure95, postée le 19-03-2009 à 18:49:36 (S | E)
peux-tu faire plusieurs phrases?
