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Message de lizzies posté le 02-04-2009 à 15:31:20 (S | E | F)
bonjour
je suis entrain d'apprendre la description d'une personne pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes^^
(je suis débutante)
Hello
Allow me to introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude
or I would like (to) introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude
Juan has short dark haired and curly-hair, his face is oval, his eyes are brown.
He wears a pair of glasses. Juan is of average height. It's a very attractive man.
Fab has short chestnut haired, his face is long and pale, his eyes are brown. He wears a pair of glasses, he has a beard. Fab is tall and slim. It's a very nice boy.
Aude is a young woman, she has a medium lenght haircut and she has chestnut haired but she has blonde streak. Her face is oval and her eyes are green.
Aude is of average height and slim. It's a pretty girl.
merci^^
thank you
Message de lizzies posté le 02-04-2009 à 15:31:20 (S | E | F)
bonjour
je suis entrain d'apprendre la description d'une personne pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes^^
(je suis débutante)
Hello
Allow me to introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude
or I would like (to) introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude
Juan has short dark haired and curly-hair, his face is oval, his eyes are brown.
He wears a pair of glasses. Juan is of average height. It's a very attractive man.
Fab has short chestnut haired, his face is long and pale, his eyes are brown. He wears a pair of glasses, he has a beard. Fab is tall and slim. It's a very nice boy.
Aude is a young woman, she has a medium lenght haircut and she has chestnut haired but she has blonde streak. Her face is oval and her eyes are green.
Aude is of average height and slim. It's a pretty girl.
merci^^
thank you
Réponse: Correction-describe de robertbrou, postée le 03-04-2009 à 13:02:42 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici quelques corrections.
Hello
Allow me to introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude.
or I would like to introduce my friends Juan, Fab and Aude
Both are OK.
Juan has short dark haired and curly-hair. His face is oval. His eyes are brown.
-or-
Juan has short, dark and curly hair, an oval face, and brown eyes.
He wears a pair of glasses.
NB: "a pair of" is correct, but optional.
Juan is of average height. He's a very attractive man.
NB: "It" is a thing, not a person.
Fab has short chestnut haired. His face is long and pale. His eyes are brown. He wears a pair of glasses. He has a beard. Fab is tall and slim. It's a very nice boy.
Aude is a young woman. She has a medium length haircut and she has chestnut haired
Aude is of average height and slim. It's a pretty girl.
Hope this helps!
robertbrou
Réponse: Correction-describe de lizzies, postée le 03-04-2009 à 16:18:32 (S | E)
merci beaucoup j ai beaucoup hésiter mais je pensais dans ma tête
a dire c'est un homme séduisant
donc je pensais dire : it's an atractive man
mais apparament on dit he's an atractive man
