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Intelligence artificielle/Correction
Message de kris51 posté le 19-04-2009 à 18:35:05 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
Je viens d'écrire un petit texte sur l'intelligence artificielle et j'aimerais que vous y jetiez un petit coup d'œil.
Merci d'avance pour la correction.
Nowadays numerous technologies evolve very quickly, In particular the artificial intelligence who since some years begins to develop.
For the moment the IA is not evolved to make decisions only it is not dangerous because she is not autonomous and cannot make a decision in front of a complex situation. Robots even if they are intelligent were creates by the man thus they should not be dangerous. Robots can help us in numerous domains: military, with "robots soldiers ", economic with an increase of the production and finally they could help us to make our domestic spots and to improve the living conditions. Formerly the medicine frightened, today it is the IA in some decades all this will be ridiculous.
However the IA has defects. Indeed I think that to create an intelligence is not without risks. We delegate more and more to machines, we are dependent. It is not dangerous at the moment because they have no wills, but when they will be intelligent they can have a different will of our. More machines have no feelings they will thus be more dangerous than the man.
To end we can say that the IA can good and bad side but that robots with IA Are difficult to create They will never exist maybe.
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Modifié par bridg le 19-04-2009 18:35
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Message de kris51 posté le 19-04-2009 à 18:35:05 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
Je viens d'écrire un petit texte sur l'intelligence artificielle et j'aimerais que vous y jetiez un petit coup d'œil.
Merci d'avance pour la correction.
Nowadays numerous technologies evolve very quickly, In particular the artificial intelligence who since some years begins to develop.
For the moment the IA is not evolved to make decisions only it is not dangerous because she is not autonomous and cannot make a decision in front of a complex situation. Robots even if they are intelligent were creates by the man thus they should not be dangerous. Robots can help us in numerous domains: military, with "robots soldiers ", economic with an increase of the production and finally they could help us to make our domestic spots and to improve the living conditions. Formerly the medicine frightened, today it is the IA in some decades all this will be ridiculous.
However the IA has defects. Indeed I think that to create an intelligence is not without risks. We delegate more and more to machines, we are dependent. It is not dangerous at the moment because they have no wills, but when they will be intelligent they can have a different will of our. More machines have no feelings they will thus be more dangerous than the man.
To end we can say that the IA can good and bad side but that robots with IA Are difficult to create They will never exist maybe.
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Modifié par bridg le 19-04-2009 18:35
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Réponse: Intelligence artificielle/Correction de laure95, postée le 20-04-2009 à 18:43:06 (S | E)
Bonsoir, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Nowadays numerous technologies evolve (présent progressif) very quickly, In particular the artificial intelligence who since some years begins (SINCE,donc present perfect) to develop.
For the moment the IA is not evolved to make decisions only it is not dangerous because she is not autonomous and cannot make a decision in front of a complex situation. Robots even if they are intelligent were creates by the man (men) thus they should not be dangerous. Robots can help us in numerous domains: military, with "robots soldiers ", economic with an increase of the production and finally they could help us to make our domestic spots and to improve the living conditions. Formerly the medicine frightened, today it is the IA in some decades all this will be ridiculous.
However the IA has defects. Indeed I think that to create (gérondif) an intelligence is not without risks. We delegate more and more to machines, we are dependent. It is not dangerous at the moment because they have no wills, but when they will be intelligent they can (CAN n'existe qu'au présent) have a different will of our. More machines have no feelings they will thus be more dangerous than the man.
To end we can say that the IA can have good and bad side but that robots with IA Are difficult to create They will never exist maybe.
Réponse: Intelligence artificielle/Correction de kris51, postée le 20-04-2009 à 20:01:26 (S | E)
merci beaucoup pour cette correction
