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The Rosetta Stone
Message de lilipomme04 posté le 14-06-2009 à 12:32:22 (S | E | F)
Hello ! I would like to know if my text is ok
Thank you very much for your answers !
The Rosetta Stone
The Rosetta Stone carries an inscription in different languages which helped the french Jean François Champollion decipher the ancient egyptian hyeroglyphic script in 1822. It is the only surviving fragment of a larger stone stela recording a decree on 27 march, 196 BC. It was discovered by Napoléon Bonaparte in July 1799 during his egyptian campaign.
At the top, the decree was written in hieroglyphs, the traditional script on Egyptia monuments. In the middle, the same decree was written in Demotic, the everyday script of literate Egyptians and at the bottom, in Greek, the language used by the government.
At this time, Egypt was ruled by a Greek dynasty and the decree was issued in honour of the king Ptolemy V Epiphanes. It records the decision of the egyptian priests to establish a royal cult in Egyptian temples. The granotoid stone stela was placed in a temple probably at the city of Sais near Rashid (Rosetta).
We can see the stone at the British Museum, in London.
Message de lilipomme04 posté le 14-06-2009 à 12:32:22 (S | E | F)
Hello ! I would like to know if my text is ok
Thank you very much for your answers !
The Rosetta Stone
The Rosetta Stone carries an inscription in different languages which helped the french Jean François Champollion decipher the ancient egyptian hyeroglyphic script in 1822. It is the only surviving fragment of a larger stone stela recording a decree on 27 march, 196 BC. It was discovered by Napoléon Bonaparte in July 1799 during his egyptian campaign.
At the top, the decree was written in hieroglyphs, the traditional script on Egyptia monuments. In the middle, the same decree was written in Demotic, the everyday script of literate Egyptians and at the bottom, in Greek, the language used by the government.
At this time, Egypt was ruled by a Greek dynasty and the decree was issued in honour of the king Ptolemy V Epiphanes. It records the decision of the egyptian priests to establish a royal cult in Egyptian temples. The granotoid stone stela was placed in a temple probably at the city of Sais near Rashid (Rosetta).
We can see the stone at the British Museum, in London.
Réponse: The Rosetta Stone de seb06000, postée le 14-06-2009 à 12:37:53 (S | E)
bonjour,
je vous mets entre parenthèses les pistes de correction:
The Rosetta Stone
The Rosetta Stone carries an inscription in different languages which helped the french Jean François Champollion ( il manque l'expression du but, objectif) decipher the ancient egyptian hyeroglyphic script in 1822. It is the only surviving fragment of a larger stone stela recording a decree on 27 march, 196 BC. It was discovered by Napoléon Bonaparte in July 1799 during his egyptian campaign.
At the top, the decree was written in hieroglyphs, the traditional script on Egyptia monuments. In the middle, the same decree was written in Demotic, the everyday script of literate Egyptians and at the bottom, in Greek, the language used by the government.
At this ( ce n'est pas le bon démonstratif) time, Egypt was ruled by a Greek dynasty and the decree was issued in honour of the ( je ne mettrais pas d'article ici car on renvoie au titre) king Ptolemy V Epiphanes. It records the decision of the egyptian priests to establish a royal cult in Egyptian temples. The granotoid stone stela was placed in a temple probably at (la conjonction n'est pas correcte) the city of Sais near Rashid (Rosetta).
We can see the stone at (idem erreur de conjonction) the British Museum, in London.
N'hésitez pas si vous avez besoin d'aide,
sébastien
Réponse: The Rosetta Stone de lilipomme04, postée le 14-06-2009 à 20:48:20 (S | E)
merci beaucoup !
