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Message de nohha posté le 15-08-2009 à 12:55:18 (S | E | F)
L'idée est de dissuader une personne de changer l'emballage de son produit. et voici mon essai.
Merci de bien vouloir le corriger
It is crises all over the world and every enterprise seeks to reduce costs, your idea is good but this is my view:
• Pallets although protected by the transparent film that seems to be solid are not really in fact some pallets arrive in poor condition.
• Pallets are reusable how to restore them ?
• Else the cardboard cartons has an impact on the environment compared to wood boxes especially if they are not biodegradable and if we consider the sustainable development implications
• The use of the wood boxes keeps the product safer than those in cardboard carton (crushing, blending and climatic condition)
• Sometimes customs officers could damage the film to check about the products at least the product will not be protect as well
• The cardboard carton could be spooled by the control system eventually the dog control
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-08-2009 19:36
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Message de nohha posté le 15-08-2009 à 12:55:18 (S | E | F)
L'idée est de dissuader une personne de changer l'emballage de son produit. et voici mon essai.
Merci de bien vouloir le corriger
It is crises all over the world and every enterprise seeks to reduce costs, your idea is good but this is my view:
• Pallets although protected by the transparent film that seems to be solid are not really in fact some pallets arrive in poor condition.
• Pallets are reusable how to restore them ?
• Else the cardboard cartons has an impact on the environment compared to wood boxes especially if they are not biodegradable and if we consider the sustainable development implications
• The use of the wood boxes keeps the product safer than those in cardboard carton (crushing, blending and climatic condition)
• Sometimes customs officers could damage the film to check about the products at least the product will not be protect as well
• The cardboard carton could be spooled by the control system eventually the dog control
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-08-2009 19:36
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Réponse: Correction/Packaging de robertbrou, postée le 17-08-2009 à 16:53:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
It is crises (accord sujet/verbe -- one crisis, many crises) all over the world and every enterprise seeks to reduce costs, (punctuation) your idea is good but this is my view:
• Pallets although protected by the transparent film (use "stretch wrap" or "shrink wrap") that seems to be solid are not really [end of sentence] in fact some pallets arrive in poor condition.
(Question: Vous parlez des pallettes elle-mêmes ou de ses chargements? J'aimerais bien voir la version française)
• Pallets are reusable [end of sentence] how to (need subject -- use "you" or "one") restore them ?
• Else (double click "sinon") the cardboard cartons (use "boxes") has an impact on the environment compared to wood boxes especially if they are not biodegradable and if we consider the sustainable developmental implications
• The use of the wood boxes keeps the product safer than those in cardboard carton (crushing, blending (???) and climatic condition)
• Sometimes customs officers could damage the film to check
• The cardboard carton could be spooled (spooled=enroulé, spoiled=gâté) by the control system (need conjunction) eventually
Hope this helps!
robertbrou
