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Discussion dans un hôtel - corrections

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Discussion dans un hôtel - corrections
Message de masteryoba posté le 18-01-2010 à 19:01:34 (S | E | F)

Voilà je suis débutant en anglais et désirerais que l'on jette un coup d'oeil sur mon travail. (Ce travail sera un travail à présenter oralement)

- Good morning Sir, how are you today ? Is it your last day ?
- Hi miss John, I’m fine thank’s ! Yes it is, unfortunately.
- Would you like your last breakfast in our wonderful hotel ? Or do you have to go ?
- Yes can I have one please ? At MY table.
- Yes sure, follow me please. But after you have to pay, don’t forget !
- Oh miss John, Calm please ! Don’t stress me ! I just want having a (tranquille) breakfast.
- Yes but I just repeat to you, don’t forget !


15 minutes later

- Did you have a good breakfast, oh excuse me, a CAAALM breakfast ?
- Yes but they are to many italians, who speak to laugh and with they hands. It’s very stressful.
- Oooh I’m so sorry !
- Me too. ( sec )
- When have you have to go ?
- Don’t you know ?
- No, I don’t care !
- So, I’m going out at 12 : 00
- All right. Can you just wait 30 minutes ?
- Why ?
- The cleaning women have to clean your room.
- Ooh no, it’s not necessary. Can I pay now ?
- Why are you so stressed suddenly ?
- Me ? I’m not stressed. I can pay now … Also if you want…
- Yes good idea, have you got a credit card ? I can (encaisser) after the cleaning woman haved clean your room.
- I’ll give you 50$ for you if you let me go now.
- I’m not like this, nobody can buy me.
- Wait a minute please, the cleaning woman are calling me.
- Ok, no problem.
- ( Hallo, WHAAT ? Is it a joke ? There is no more things in his room ? No more furniture Just one bed ? Oh, god ! ) CRUNCH
Come on, Sit down, and don’t speak.
First, you have to pay
- Oh yees suuuure ! Here is my credit card !
- Thanks. And now, I’m calling the police !
- No please, I’ll give you anything you want. You know, I’m very poor.
- Very poor ? You’re in a five stars hotel and you say that you’re poor ?
- Yes, my hamster’s dead yesterday, I’ve no more family, I’m so saaaad !
- HA.HA.HA ! I don’t care. Give me 5000$ and I don’t speak to the police.
- 5000$ ?????
- All right. 91…
- NO, NO, NO I’ll pay ! Here is your 5000 $ !
- Thank you, and a really good day ! :D
- ☹




Réponse: Discussion dans un hôtel - corrections de gerondif, postée le 18-01-2010 à 19:38:40 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
je ne m'occupe pas du style , juste des maladresses......

Good morning Sir, how are you today ? Is it your last day ?
- Hi miss John, I’m fine thanks ! Yes it is, unfortunately.
- Would you like your last breakfast in our wonderful hotel ? Or do you have to go ?
- Yes can I have one please ? At MY table.
- Yes sure, follow me please. But after you have to pay, don’t forget !
- Oh miss John, Calm please ! Don’t stress me ! I just want having(inf complet) a (quiettranquille) breakfast.
- Yes but I just repeat to you, don’t forget !


15 minutes later

- Did you have a good breakfast, oh excuse me, a CAAALM(quiet) breakfast ?
- Yes but they are to many italians, who speak to laugh(trop fort,too loud) and with they hands. It’s very stressful.
- Oooh I’m so sorry !
- Me too. ( sec )
- When have you have (erreur d'auxiliaire)to go ?
- Don’t you know ?
- No, I don’t care !
- So, I’m going out at 12 : 00
- All right. Can you just wait 30 minutes ?
- Why ?
- The cleaning women have to clean your room.
- Ooh no, it’s not necessary. Can I pay now ?
- Why are you so stressed suddenly ?
- Me ? I’m not stressed. I can pay now … Also if you want(sens ?)…
- Yes good idea, have you got a credit card ? I can (encaisser) after the cleaning women haved clean (mettez plutôt le ed à clean) your room.
- I’ll give you 50$ for you if you let me go now.
- I’m not like this, nobody can buy me.
- Wait a minute please, the cleaning women are calling me.
- Ok, no problem.
- ( Hallo, WHAAT ? Is it a joke ? There is no more things (nothing left)in his room ? No more furniture Just one bed ? Oh, god (majuscule ?)! ) CRUNCH
Come on, Sit down, and don’t speak.
First, you have to pay
- Oh yees suuuure ! Here is my credit card !
- Thanks. And now, I’m calling the police !
- No please, I’ll give you anything you want. You know, I’m very poor.
- Very poor ? You’re in a five stars (adjectival = invariable)hotel and you say that you’re poor ?
- Yes, my hamster’s dead(dead = adjectif d'état, le hamster mourut hier,sa dernière action, donc utiliser to die au prétérit) yesterday, I’ve(si have est abrégé, c'est l'auxiliare de got) no more family, I’m so saaaad !
- HA.HA.HA ! I don’t care. Give me 5000$ and I don’t(plutôt au futur) speak to the police.
- 5000$ ?????
- All right. 91…
- NO, NO, NO I’ll pay ! Here is your 5000 $ !(is singulier. 5000: pluriel) sauf si on pense à la somme de 5000 $)
- Thank you, and (have) a really good day ! :D




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