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Correction/ dessin animé
Message de mariine posté le 18-05-2011 à 18:06:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'avais un résumé de dessin animé à faire et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait quelques fautes...
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Once upon a time, a saleswoman who owned a skins shop. One day, a wealthy woman came in this shop, she seeked a wolf skin. The young girl didn't get a wolf skin. So, the sales woman promised to her to get it later. The old woman left the shop. The sales girl didn't know how to get a wolf skin. She looked out through the window. Suddenly, she saw a wolf, she wanted his skin. She made a plan which consisted to open a barber shop and to shave the wolf's skin. The plan didn't work. The wolf went to see a mother who told him to see his grandmother. He owed bring tooth to his grandmother. Meanwhile, the young woman came to the wolf's grandmother and tooked her place, she wore the skin of the old wolf. When the wolf arrived, he saw that. But as he was greedy he took the skin of the grandmother and he brought it to the shop. He took the shop and the old woman bought the skin (with the sales girl who was in the skin)...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-05-2011 18:53
Message de mariine posté le 18-05-2011 à 18:06:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'avais un résumé de dessin animé à faire et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait quelques fautes...
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Once upon a time, a saleswoman who owned a skins shop. One day, a wealthy woman came in this shop, she seeked a wolf skin. The young girl didn't get a wolf skin. So, the sales woman promised to her to get it later. The old woman left the shop. The sales girl didn't know how to get a wolf skin. She looked out through the window. Suddenly, she saw a wolf, she wanted his skin. She made a plan which consisted to open a barber shop and to shave the wolf's skin. The plan didn't work. The wolf went to see a mother who told him to see his grandmother. He owed bring tooth to his grandmother. Meanwhile, the young woman came to the wolf's grandmother and tooked her place, she wore the skin of the old wolf. When the wolf arrived, he saw that. But as he was greedy he took the skin of the grandmother and he brought it to the shop. He took the shop and the old woman bought the skin (with the sales girl who was in the skin)...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-05-2011 18:53
Réponse: Correction/ dessin animé de gerondif, postée le 18-05-2011 à 18:50:42 (S | E)
Bonjour,
la réponse est oui!
je ne sais pas comment vous cherchez votre vocabulaire mais par exemple, "il devait apporter des dents? à sa grand mère est traduit par: he owed: il devait de l'argent......
Once upon a time, (il y avait: there was)a saleswoman who owned a skins shop. One day, a wealthy woman came in this shop, she seeked(plutôt look for en ing) a wolf skin. The young girl didn't get(plutôt have) a wolf skin. So, the saleswoman promised
conclusion: l'homme est un loup pour l'homme mais le loup est un loup pour la vendeuse !
Il y a un loup quelque part, donc!
Réponse: Correction/ dessin animé de mariine, postée le 19-05-2011 à 18:32:13 (S | E)
D'accord oui je vois :/ Merci beaucoup
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