Devoir/Roxane
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Message de pinkmuffin posté le 18-09-2012 à 22:47:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé ce texte, pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les éventuelles erreurs, s'il vous plaît ?
Merci à vous.:
Roxane is a Jamaican girl. She was born February 29, 1981 in Kingsdom while Debby is an Anglo-ameriacan girl. Unlike, Roxane was born July 7, 1981 in new-orleans.
The two girls have 31 years old. In addtion, it is know as Debby is a teacher and that Roxane study to become a lawyer.
Roxane resides in Usa (it is not know precisely) or else, we know that Debby reside. She resides in Usa rather Alabama.
Moreover, the passeport of Roxane was issued in 2002 on contrary of Debby beacause she was issued in January 2009.
Besides, Roxane's passeport will expire on 2012 that is this years.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-09-2012 09:01
Message de pinkmuffin posté le 18-09-2012 à 22:47:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé ce texte, pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les éventuelles erreurs, s'il vous plaît ?
Merci à vous.:
Roxane is a Jamaican girl. She was born February 29, 1981 in Kingsdom while Debby is an Anglo-ameriacan girl. Unlike, Roxane was born July 7, 1981 in new-orleans.
The two girls have 31 years old. In addtion, it is know as Debby is a teacher and that Roxane study to become a lawyer.
Roxane resides in Usa (it is not know precisely) or else, we know that Debby reside. She resides in Usa rather Alabama.
Moreover, the passeport of Roxane was issued in 2002 on contrary of Debby beacause she was issued in January 2009.
Besides, Roxane's passeport will expire on 2012 that is this years.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-09-2012 09:01
Réponse: Devoir/Roxane de notrepere, postée le 18-09-2012 à 23:43:04 (S | E)
HelloRoxane is a Jamaican girl. She was born February 29, 1981 in Kingsdom while Debby is an Anglo-ameriacan girl. Unlike, Roxane was born July 7, 1981 in New Orleans. (Mal dit : Unlike Roxane, Debby was...)
The two girls have (mauvais verbe ; il faut 'be' en anglais) 31 years old. In addition, it is know
(participe passé) that Debby is a teacher and that Roxane study (forme progressive/continue) to become a lawyer.Roxane resides in the USA (it is not know
(p.p.) precisely where) or else, we know that Debby reside
. She resides in the USA rather(mal dit) Alabama.Moreover, the passeport of Roxane (forme possessive) was issued in 2002 on contrary of
Debby beacause(orthographe) she was issued in January 2009.Besides, Roxane's passeport will expire on 2012 that is this years.
while = comparatif lorsqu'il s'agit le même sujet
Roxane is a Jamaican girl while Debby in an American.
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Modifié par notrepere le 18-09-2012 23:43
Réponse: Devoir/Roxane de pinkmuffin, postée le 19-09-2012 à 17:43:57 (S | E)
Thank you. 
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