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Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir

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Message de leavar posté le 26-04-2015 à 19:03:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous m'aider au niveau de l'orthographe et de la conjugaison de mon texte s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps o create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion i’am decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How the media influence our life?
So, firstly we will see the fact that the media influence our life of everyday and in the secondly the fact that the media is always present in our life.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Has he said Malcolm Hex «the media is the most powerfull» because they are lot of people who are very influence with the media. Media control and manipulate people when they are a scandal or they have a role in the trial of personnality famous like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if a day they say something and the next day they say something also, people always believe in it. The media distort the reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the true but the media are so powerfull that the people believe in it.
In class we studing a text, is name was «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in society of accumulation. This text talk about the fact that the advertising was a real industry and This industry had 3 problems, the first is the fact that the message is empty, the second problem is environmental because the human activity have a real impact in the environment and the last problem is a problem economic because we must begin to imagine economic models that appreciate the finite, and that don’t rely on endless economic growth. So the author Justin Lewis trying to tell us that advertising doesn’t influence our everyday life in a negative way but is also responsable for the economic and environmental issues we are facing today.
So the media influence our life everyday because they are the mass media who is always present in our life.

Indeed this mass media was always present everywhere more and more. You doesn’t escape to the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced at this advertising of everything, everytime For example when we watching TV they are the advertising between each program. In class we have saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere the advertising was always present in the street. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target was the teenagers because the teenagers watches 3-4 hours of TV per day and sees 40,000 TV commercials every year so this teenagers was the most confront at the influence of the advertising, and for shoot the teenagers at consomation advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media they influence, they shoot at the consommation in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence the people everyday because this media was present everytime. So the people was constantly subjected at this influence in different field like for example in the politics or in the trial of personnality, but also in our consomation in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2015 19:17



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 27-04-2015 à 20:24:12 (S | E)
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2015 16:29



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de lucile83, postée le 01-05-2015 à 06:31:06 (S | E)
anyone?



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2015 à 11:12:46 (S | E)
Bonjour,


ah, j'ai trouvé ça sur le côté singulier ou pluriel de media: (Oxford dictionaries)
The word media comes from the Latin plural of medium. The traditional view is that it should therefore be treated as a plural noun in all its senses in English and be used with a plural rather than a singular verb: the media have not followed the reports (rather than ‘has’). In practice, in the sense ‘television, radio, and the press collectively’, it behaves as a collective noun (like staff or clergy, for example), which means that it is now acceptable in standard English for it to take either a singular or a plural verb. The word is also increasingly used in the plural form medias, as if it had a conventional singular form media, especially when referring to different forms of new media, and in the sense ‘the material or form used by an artist’: there were great efforts made by the medias of the involved countries about 600 works in all genres and medias were submitted for review.

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps o(to) create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion i’am decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How the media influence our life?(Apprenez à faire une forme interrogative!!)
So, firstly we will see the fact (est-ce qu'on peut "voir un fait"?) that the media influence our life of everyday(mot composé) and in the secondly the fact that the media is(media est pluriel) always present in our life(pluriel).

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Has he said Malcolm Hex(le pauvre Malcom X doit se retourner dans sa tombe de voir son nom ainsi maltraité, remarquez qu'hier c'était Hexen Nacht, la nuit des sorcières!)(Has he said, a-t-il dit, ne veut rien dire, vous vouliez dire: comme le dit Malcom X ) «the media is the most powerfull» (ce singulier me paraît maladroit) because they are(à nouveau confusion entre ils sont et il y a) lot of(à nouveau mélange entre a lot of et lots of) people who are very influence(participe passé!) with the media. Media control and manipulate people when they are(il y a au singulier, pas ils sont) a scandal or they have a role in the trial of personnality famous(inverser et mettre au pluriel) like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if a(remplacez par le chiffre 1) day they say something and the next day they say something else also, people always(changer de traduction pour toujours, c'est toujours au sens de encore, pas toujours au sens de continuellement) believe in it. The media distort the reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the true(mettez le nom au lieu de l'adjectif) but the media are so powerfull that the people believe in it.
In class we studing(Cette conjugaison n'existe pas! Mettez un prétérit) a text, is(possessif neutre) name was(plutôt son titre que son nom de baptême) «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text talk (le s du présent + un texte n'a pas de cordes vocales) about the fact that the advertising was a real industry and This industry had 3 problems, the first is the fact that the message is empty, the second problem is environmental because the human activity have(singulier) a real impact in the environment and the last problem is a problem economic (dans l'autre sens) because we must begin to imagine economic models that appreciate the finite, and that don’t rely on endless economic growth. So the author Justin Lewis trying (pas de conjugaison en ing seul, mettez un présent simple)to tell us that advertising doesn’t influence our everyday life in a negative way but is also responsable for the economic and environmental issues we are facing today.
So the media influence our life everyday because they are the mass media who is(vous commencez par they are, ça ne peut pas devenir singulier!! who est faux) always present in our life(pluriel).

Indeed this mass media was(ce singulier me gêne) always more and more present everywhere. You doesn’t (aïe!! conjugaison du présent!!) escape to the society of media(noms composés), of consumers because they are always faced at this advertising of everything, everytime For example when we watching(pas de conjugaison en ing seul, mettez un présent simple) TV they are(confusion entre il y a et ils sont) the advertising between each program. In class we have saw(temps inexistant, supprimez have) that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere the advertising was(mettez un présent) always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target was the teenagers because the teenagers watches(sujet pluriel!) 3-4 hours of TV per(every est plus courant) day and sees 40,000 TV commercials every year so this teenagers was(pluriel) the most confront(participe passé) at the influence of the advertising, and for(revoir le cours sur pour + verbe, notion de but!) shoot(mauvais choix de verbe, les pousser à la consommation) the teenagers at consomation(comme le mot est mal orthographié, le traducteur le laisse tel quel!) advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media they influence, they shoot at the consommation in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence the people everyday because this media was(ce présent me gêne) present everytime. So the people was(les gens, people, c'est pluriel! on ne diraît pas j'ai vu un gen...) constantly subjected at this influence in different field(pluriel!) like for example in the politics or in the trial(sens?) of personnality, but also in our consomation in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.




Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 03-05-2015 à 14:40:49 (S | E)
Bonjour, pouvez-vous me dire si ma correction est correct s'il vous plait. Merci

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How the media influence our life?
So, firstly we will see the influence of media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X as said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced with the media. Media control and manipulate people when they are a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising was a real industry.
So the media influence our life everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed this mass medias were always more and more present everywhere more and more. You don’t escape of the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, everytime For example when we watch TV there are advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere the advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target was the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and sees 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers were the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media was present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields like for example in politics or in the trial of personnality, but also in our consumption in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 15:21:24 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Bonjour, pouvez-vous me dire si ma correction est correcte s'il vous plait. Merci
Non, vous republiez des erreurs signalées sans y toucher....

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability TO influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How the media influence our life?(forme interrogative fausse)
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X as(auxixiliaiea avoir) said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced with the media. The Media control and manipulate people when they are(il y a) a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth(maladroit) but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising was(présent) a real industry.
So the media influence our life everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed this mass medias were always more and more present everywhere more and more. You don’t(utimisez plutôt can) escape of the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, everytime For example when we watch TV there are advertising(advets est pluriel, advertising non) between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere the advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. [The first target was the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and sees 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers were the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption, advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.(j'aurais mis toute cette phrase au présent)]
Whatever the form of the media,(virgule) they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media was(pluriel) present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields like for example in politics or in the trial of personnality(sens? le jugement de personnalité), but also in our consumption in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 03-05-2015 à 16:54:51 (S | E)
Bonjour, est- ce que cette fois ma correction est correcte? merci
I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How does media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced with the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there are a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising are a real industry.
So the media influence our life everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed this mass medias were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape to the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, everytime For example when we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and sees 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields since for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities, but also in our consumption in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 17:24:27 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Essayez de corriger ce que je colorie, certains mots sont indiqués pour la troisième fois......

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together, members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How does(media est pluriel) the media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced with(influencés par, pas avec) the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there are a scandal(le fujet réel scandal, est singulier) or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics it isn’t the truth("ce n'est pas la vérité" ne veut pas dire grand chose, les gens ne disent pas toujours la vérité) but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit like for example in the politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising are a real industry.
So the media influence our life(pluriel) everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed this mass medias(medium donne media au pluriel, et this est un singulier) were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape to(verbe transitif direct) the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, For example everytime we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and sees(ce S est en trop) 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields since(inutile) for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities, but also in our consumption // cette fin n'est pas reliée à ce qui précède: les gens sont soumis à cette influence en nous poussant à acheter des choses inutiles" ne va pas) in pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 03-05-2015 à 18:58:57 (S | E)
Re Bonjour, pouvez vous me dire s'il vous plait si j'ai corrigé toute mes fautes ?

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How do the media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced by the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there is a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics sometimes they don’t tell the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising is a real industry.
So the media influence our lives everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed these mass media were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape at the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, everytime For example everytime we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and see 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities. But thes media influence also in our consumption with the advertising because they pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 19:05:44 (S | E)
Hello,
I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How do the media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced by the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there is a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics sometimes they don’t tell the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics it isn’t the truth but the media are so powerful that the people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising is a real industry.
So the media influence our lives everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed these mass media were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape at the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, everytime For example everytime we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere,(virgule) advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and see 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption,(virgule) advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities. But thes media influence also in our consumption with the advertising because they pushing us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 03-05-2015 à 19:27:30 (S | E)
Bonjour, je pense avoir tout corrigé cette fois ci

I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How do the media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced by the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there is a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics sometimes they don’t tell the truth but the media are so powerful that people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising is a real industry.
So the media influence our lives everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed these mass media were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, For example everytime we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere, advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and see 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption, advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities. But the media influence also our consumption with advertising because they push us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 23:59:10 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
ça devient bon!
I’m going to talk about the notion places and forms of power.In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence people’s behaviour. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it. In this notion I have decided to focus on the theme of the power of media.
How do the media influence our lives?
So, firstly we will see the influence of the media in our everyday life and secondly the fact that the media are always present in our lives.

Modern society is ruled by various sources of power such as the media, advertising for example. Malcolm X has said «the media is the most powerful» because there are lots of people who are very influenced by the media. The Media control and manipulate people when there is a scandal or they have a role in the trial of famous personnalities like Oscar Pistorius for example. The media control our minds, if one day they say something and the next day they say something else, people believe in it everytime. The media distort reality. And the media control and manipulate people to make a profit since for example in politics sometimes they don’t tell the truth but the media are so powerful that people believe in it.
In class we studied a text, named «the power of advertising», the message of this text is the more you buy the happier you are so the fact of consuming all the time would make us happy, so we are in a material world, in a society of accumulation. This text deals with the fact that advertising is a real industry.
So the media influence our lives everyday because they are the mass media, they are always present in our lives.

Indeed these mass media were always more and more present everywhere. You can’t escape the society of media, of consumers because they are always faced to this advertising of everything, For example everytime we watch TV there is advertising between each program. In class we saw that 30 % of local TV news time is devoted to advertising in the USA. Moreover when we go somewhere, advertising is always present in the streets. Nowadays the media are more and more present in the new technologies like the internet, indeed 10% of advertising budgets are now spent on online ads. The first target is the teenagers because teenagers watch 3-4 hours of TV everyday and see 40,000 TV commercials every year so these teenagers are the most confronted to the influence of advertising, and to push the teenagers to consumption, advertising spent 2 billion dollars every year targeting young consumers.
Whatever the form of the media, they influence, they push to the consumption in our life.

In conclusion we can say that all forms of media influence people everyday because these media were present everytime. So the people were constantly subjected to this influence in different fields for example in politics or in the trial of famous personnalities. But the media influence also our consumption with advertising because they push us to buy different things we don’t need.



Réponse: Oral/formes et lieux de pouvoir de leavar, postée le 04-05-2015 à 09:14:25 (S | E)
Bonjour, Merci pour toute vos réponses




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