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Correction /Vie de femme

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Correction /Vie de femme
Message de heroe974 posté le 03-05-2015 à 19:47:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici une expression écrite sur les conditions de vie des femmes dans les pays en développement et je voudrais une correction s'il vous plait. Merci pour vos réponses.

In developping countries, many girls suffer some physicals and psycologicals mistreatments. Indeed gender discrimination is more important in these countries than in industrialed countries and increase the gap between men and women.
The statistics show a very high infant mortalty and arranged marriage in india or in Pakistan.
Today, in 21 century, thousand of females fetures are arborted. While, in USA Pre natal test is used to determinate diseases beraring genes, in India it used to determinate the sex of the fœtus. The denying of the acess to medical care for girls is also responsible for this high mortality rate.
Moreover the life of girls come down to be unslaved first by their parents and second by her husband. They are considered as a financial bounder. Therefore, they are married as soon as possible and can't choose their groom. One in five is married before the age of fifteen.
Women are also subjects of differents discriminations ;
They are deprived of the right ton an education and they have to stay home. For example, many girls in developping countries are raped or more killed only because she was outside at night.
In saudi Arabia, women can't drive and dress whatever they want. Their body must be completely coved up.
In the most of developping countries, they are treated as a slave.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 20:52


Réponse: Correction /Vie de femme de notrepere, postée le 04-05-2015 à 00:52:17 (S | E)
Hello

In developping countries, many girls suffer some physicals and psychologicals mistreatments. Indeed gender discrimination is more important in these countries than in industrialized countries and there is anincrease in the gap between men and women.
The statistics show a very high infant mortality and arranged marriages in India or (in) Pakistan.
Today, in the 21st century, thousands of females fetuses are arborted. While, in the USA, a pre-natal test is used to determinate disease-beraring genes, in India it is used to determinate the sex of the fœtus. The denying of the access to medical care for girls is also responsible for this high mortality rate.
Moreover, the life of girls comes down to being enslaved first by their parents and second by her husband. They are considered as a financial burden. Therefore, they are married as soon as possible and can't choose their husbands. One in five is married before the age of fifteen.
Women are also the subjects of differents discriminations ;
They are deprived of the right ton an education and they have to stay home. For example, many girls in developping countries are raped or more are killed only because she was outside at night.
In Saudi Arabia, women can't drive and dress however they want. Their body must be completely coveered up.
In the most of developping countries, they are treated as a slave.




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