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Message de juujuc posté le 02-03-2017 à 19:23:23 (S | E | F)
bonjour
j'ai un oral en anglais et j'aimerais s'il vous plait que vous vérifiiez si j'ai fait des fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to speak about my training
During the week of 13 to 17 Fébuary, i did my training at the seaport of Pointe a Pitre with Audrey.
Monday, we met Mrs Narayanan. She was our responsible. She had entrusted us of two ladies Mrs Proya and Mrs sarip who took care of us.
Tuesday,we met several pepole who explained their work at the seaport.
Thursday we took a boat tour of we waterfront of the seaport of pointe a pitre.
In the afternoon, we had the opportunity to speak to a cruise passenger of a german boat. And then we took pictures of us with the boat in the background.
Friday we went accompanied by Mrs. proya and Mrs. sarip to visit the seaport of jarry we met Loghan who made his internship the
Accompanied by an employee from the Port of Jarry, we visited the container terminal, we even rode on a portico it was very impressive!
Then we returned to the harbor of peak a pitre and we were sad to leave because we were already involved in the company.
i finished
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-03-2017 22:30
On doit écrire "I" , pas "i".
Message de juujuc posté le 02-03-2017 à 19:23:23 (S | E | F)
bonjour
j'ai un oral en anglais et j'aimerais s'il vous plait que vous vérifiiez si j'ai fait des fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to speak about my training
During the week of 13 to 17 Fébuary, i did my training at the seaport of Pointe a Pitre with Audrey.
Monday, we met Mrs Narayanan. She was our responsible. She had entrusted us of two ladies Mrs Proya and Mrs sarip who took care of us.
Tuesday,we met several pepole who explained their work at the seaport.
Thursday we took a boat tour of we waterfront of the seaport of pointe a pitre.
In the afternoon, we had the opportunity to speak to a cruise passenger of a german boat. And then we took pictures of us with the boat in the background.
Friday we went accompanied by Mrs. proya and Mrs. sarip to visit the seaport of jarry we met Loghan who made his internship the
Accompanied by an employee from the Port of Jarry, we visited the container terminal, we even rode on a portico it was very impressive!
Then we returned to the harbor of peak a pitre and we were sad to leave because we were already involved in the company.
i finished
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-03-2017 22:30
On doit écrire "I" , pas "i".
Réponse : Correction/préparation orale de juujuc, postée le 04-03-2017 à 16:33:03 (S | E)
ah merci mais sinon je n'ai pas fait de fautes...
Réponse : Correction/préparation orale de lucile83, postée le 04-03-2017 à 16:49:44 (S | E)
oh si !! Je pense qu'un membre du site corrigera, je n'ai personnellement pas le temps, désolée.Réponse : Correction/préparation orale de juujuc, postée le 04-03-2017 à 18:06:09 (S | E)
D'accord merci
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