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Message de amscrimi posté le 30-03-2009 à 05:24:10 (S | E | F)

salut ! pouvrez-vous me corriger cette lettre? qu'en pensez-vous?

Hello dear Jimmy !
It's Sunday afternoon and I feel quite sad, because my friend Maria is coming back to Italy in a few days. She is like a sister for me, I will miss her a lot...so I decided to write you a letter, I am sure it will make me feel better.
We had a dinner here last night, Maria, my very good friend Luc, my son Chris and I. It was funny, like always when we are together.
I am thrilled to see you in New York in August...so strange...we don't really know each other, but still I feel we are close in a way.
I am also going to France in June, I always go there at least once a year, I need to see my family: my mother, my brother and his three wonderful children, and also need to come back to my culture once in a while.
You cannot imagine how much I love Paris ! It's the most incredible city in the world !
I have noticed that your handwriting is much better now ! I don't know what you did for that, but it works ! Definitly.
Just one question, if you don't mind...: What do you think about computers? I ask that because my handwriting is awful too, computers really changed my life !
Tell me more about your life, how are things going for you?
Big hugs
Jenny


Réponse: Lettre à corriger de laure95, postée le 30-03-2009 à 13:45:24 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Hello dear Jimmy !
It's Sunday afternoon and I feel quite sad, because my friend Maria is coming back to Italy in a few days. She is like a sister for me, I will miss her a lot...so I decided (present perfect) to write you a letter, I am sure it will make me feel better.
We had a dinner here last night,with Maria, my very good friend Luc, my son Chris and I (me). It was funny, like always (as usual) when we are together.
I am thrilled to see you in New York in August...so strange...we don't really know each other, but still I feel we are close in a way.
I am also going to France in June, I always go there at least once a year, I need to see my family: my mother, my brother and his three wonderful children, and also need to come back to my culture once in a while.
You cannot imagine how much I love Paris ! It's the most incredible city in the world !
I have noticed that your handwriting is much better now ! I don't know what you did (present perfect) for that, but it works ! Definitely.
Just one question, if you don't mind...: What do you think about computers? I ask that because my handwriting is awful too, computers really changed (present perfect) my life !
Tell me more about your life, how are things going for you?
Big hugs
Jenny




Réponse: Lettre à corriger de amscrimi, postée le 30-03-2009 à 14:08:21 (S | E)
Bonjour ! Merci pour la rèponse, voici une correction.


Dear Jimmy !
It's Sunday afternoon and I feel quite sad, because my friend Maria is coming back to Italy in a few days. She is like a sister for me, I will miss her a lot...so I have decided to write you a letter, I am sure it will make me feel better.
We had a dinner here last night, with Maria, my very good friend Luc, my son Chris and me. It was funny, as usual when we are together.
I am thrilled to see you in New York in August...it’s so strange...we don't really know each other, but I still feel we are close in a way.
I am also going to France in June, I always go there at least once a year, I need to see my family: my mother, my brother and his three wonderful children, and also need to come back to my culture once in a while.
You cannot imagine how much I love Paris ! It's the most incredible city in the world !
I have noticed that your handwriting is much better now ! I don't know what you have done for that, but it works ! Definitely.
Just one question, if you don't mind...: What do you think about computers? I ask that because my handwriting is awful too, computers have really changed my life !
Tell me more about your life, how are things going for you?
Big hugs
Jenny



Réponse: Lettre à corriger de laure95, postée le 30-03-2009 à 15:30:56 (S | E)
Dear Jimmy !
It's Sunday afternoon and I feel quite sad, because my friend Maria is coming back to Italy in a few days. She is like a sister for me, I will miss her a lot...so I have decided to write you a letter, I am sure it will make me feel better.
We (I) had a dinner here last night, with Maria, my very good friend Luc, (and) my son Chris and me. It was funny, as usual, when we are together.
I am thrilled to see you in New York in August...it’s so strange...we don't really know each other, but I still feel (have still the impression ou feeling) that we are close in a way.
I am also going to France in June, I always go there at least once a year, I need to see my family: my mother, my brother and his three wonderful children, and also need to come back to my culture once in a while.
You cannot imagine how much I love Paris ! It's the most incredible city in the world !
I have noticed that your handwriting is much better now ! I don't know what you have done for that, but it works ! Definitely.
I Just have one question, if you don't mind...: What do you think about computers? I ask you that because my handwriting is awful too, computers have really changed my life !
Tell me more about your life, how are things going for you?
Big hugs
Jenny




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