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Message de charlatan posté le 29-12-2011 à 20:15:20 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir !
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes de ce paragraphe , s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Internet is one of the most gorgeous invention that we use recently . It offers to us variety of services that we need in our life.
The chat is one of these services . We can benefit from it by using different programs such as : Skype , Yahoo Messenger , MSN ... and many websites like : Facebook , Twitter ...
Students can use the net too. It helps them to find solutions for their difficulties ( in Math , physic , English , French , science ... )
So we have to use this invention in the life to make it easier and more comfortable.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-12-2011 23:10
Message de charlatan posté le 29-12-2011 à 20:15:20 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir !
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes de ce paragraphe , s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Internet is one of the most gorgeous invention that we use recently . It offers to us variety of services that we need in our life.
The chat is one of these services . We can benefit from it by using different programs such as : Skype , Yahoo Messenger , MSN ... and many websites like : Facebook , Twitter ...
Students can use the net too. It helps them to find solutions for their difficulties ( in Math , physic , English , French , science ... )
So we have to use this invention in the life to make it easier and more comfortable.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-12-2011 23:10
Réponse: Internet/invention de notrepere, postée le 30-12-2011 à 06:39:17 (S | E)
Bonjour Faites attention à l'emploi des articles.
Internet (1) is one of the most gorgeous (2) invention that we use recently (2). It offers to us a variety of services that we need in our life (3).
The (4) chat is one of these services. We can benefit from it by using different programs such as : Skype , Yahoo Messenger , MSN ... and many websites like : Facebook , Twitter ...
Students can use the net too. It helps them to find solutions for their difficulties ( in Math
, physic , English , French , science ... )So we have to use this invention in the (4) life to make it easier and more comfortable.
(1) article manquant
(2) ce mot ne va pas
(3) pluriel
(4) pas d'article
(5) How do
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