Réponse: de here4u, postée le 21-04-2014 à 10:37:43 (S | E)
Hello ! What a long text ... I'll do part of it now ... someone else might step in ... if not I'll come back when I can ...
(Visiblement, le texte n'est pas rédigé entièrement ce qui est TB pour ne pas le lire ou le réciter, mais peut induire des hésitations concernant certaines structures)
I. the lack of human contact and the predominance of virtual contact
1: It is a caricature, a lampoon. It is lambast at mobile iPhone. It is a bitter cartoon.(Eviter les 'it is' trop nombreux)
Parents reading the actual info(? the news ?) whereas the boy is reading trite (? I'm not sur of what you mean ...) info. He has no empathy with(for or towards) his parents. Father = he is aghast, he isn’t complaining because of his son’s attitude. The father seems to be old fashioned and also bewildered towards the solid grounding in social network of his son.
This cartoon questionX the impact of mobile iPhone.
2: There are two robots. Fb is much beefier= metaphor to show the power of Fb onto Big Brother. BB embodies control, invigilateX. The lampoonist wants people to brood on new technologies.
1984: Spied BB = they are unwillingly under the thumb of BB. They are summited(spelling) to BB and they are under the suffer from, under the sway.(construction à revoir.melange verbe et nom ...) BB keeps them in line.
Fb = people willingly join Fb, social network enjoy it. Open info, doted on that and this is the main characteristic. They are spied on and don’t realise that. It flights(mélange verbe/nom!) open their borders of their life pervert life. They pride themselves(,?) on having an FB account. They give it everybody. People have no insight (# hindsight) (not clear?).
Drawing the line between real friends and fake friends, shadow friends: complicated because it is virtual. But it is not innocuous. This is a riddle: communicate fb and virtual??. Many young people are baffled by this aspect.
And I must admit I'm baffled by your text too ... It's extremely difficult to understand what you mean and follow your stream of thoughts through these incomplete sentences. I hope you know what you mean through these notes ... I'm not sure I understand ... Your 'text' is too much of 'a riddle'. I'm sorry, but I won't go on. I can't ! I hope someone else will do it ...
Good luck !
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